Monday, November 30, 2009

I need to think out loud so I figure I would express it on here. I was reviewing the information that I received from the group critique and I have summed up that I am not as close to being finished as I had hoped to be. My thesis and /or my argument aren’t as strong as I thought. I have looked over my paper and I have already changed so much about what my argument really is. I was hoping not to concede to a boring argument, but it may look like I have to choice. My argument seems to be more subjective because I can’t seem to choose what I want to argue about in the first place. So now I have to choose the direction I want to take my paper. I have received so many ideas and suggestions and I’ve found more sources to help with my topic, but everywhere I look I’m only finding information about dividing my topic into 2 categories. The 2 topics I don’t want to mention on here shows the direction that I didn’t want to take in the beginning. I’m still doing research, and maybe if I just hold out longer and keep looking I just might stumble across info that may support a direction that I will prove more interesting.

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