almost to the final draft.....

Ok, so now we are winding down the end of this fall semester, and I feel done and ready to move on to the next one. So the last time I wrote was about how I was feeling and what I was thinking about my middle draft of the classical argument paper. Since that group critique, I have been reviewing again and again and again, I may have said this before, but I have changed my paper and my thesis all over the place. I am wondering if my thesis is now strong enough to withstand the college level of writing. I have already gone to the writing lab 2 times and each of my reviewers has told me something completely different about my paper. The first time I went, the girl that reviewed my paper to help me produce my argument. She gave me really good information, but it wasn’t exactly fitting to what I was trying to explain to her what I wanted to write about. So that 1st review wasn’t exactly as beneficial to me as I was hoping for. I went to the writing lab a second time, not too long after because I felt unsatisfied with the information the first visit. This second girl was a lot clearer to me than the first. I specified as much as possible the 2nd time because maybe the 1st girl didn’t comprehend what I was saying. The second girl listened to me and explained to me more in detail what I was lacking in my organization. Now it’s off to the final draft.